I am aqua
as water bounces
on a drumbeat
I swim in my
soul's music
I am a seal
in lonely, dark quarantine
splashing in dark air thick as water
I am afraid of this void
trapped in a box pyramid
nature's attempts to destroy my prison
only sharpen its walls
I am the lone pinecone
that's been rooted by luck
the last among 37 sisters
many layered discs
wooden fibres spun in tight circles
wound up like thread on a spool
I sit in my computer chair
and wind myself until my head bobs
now it's all heavy
the world looks askew
seeing past my brain's straightforward filters
a world rotating on an unseen axis
that spins us to our cores
*Inspired by Ellen Jaffe's "I am..." prompt
i think this is so cool! i love how you shaped your poem into a person, what a clever idea. i also like the poem overall, it's really nice! :)
ReplyDeleteEmily, this is so brilliant.
ReplyDeletei love your line, "i am the lone pinecone", it really made me laugh. i really like the way you use imagery (both a visual representation & in my mind).
ReplyDeleteThe images presented here are specific, vivid, and powerful. The inukshuk formation helps to present the image of humanity inherent. Very eloquent, I like it very much.
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